rakua
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Lowki
Mar 5, 2006 18:22:01 GMT -5
Post by rakua on Mar 5, 2006 18:22:01 GMT -5
Age: He appears very young, no more than 25
Race: He is a Vampirick Angel
Class: He is a God in angle form and an assassin in vamp form.
Allignment:Bad
Elements: Fire with some limited time magick
Appearance: He is tall and has a set of black raven like wings, with broad shoulders and bloodshot red ruby eyes. he wears a silver tinted cloak and a pendant around his neck, it is a yin-yang with a dragon tooth in the center.
History: He was born a vampire and was slayen, but he was set as the god of death. He can switch forms from and angel to an angelic vampire.
Skills:He has tremendous agility and can also fly, he can drink blood of other species and take some of their powers.
Super (RACE) Traits: He can fly and suck some powers from other races
Spells: He can slow time and throw fire balls, he can also reverse time and turn himself into a ball of blue flames.
Weakness: Some of his past is un-known and therefore creates problems in his life, and sometimes he is not sane enough.
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Lowki
Mar 5, 2006 22:09:13 GMT -5
Post by Vegeta on Mar 5, 2006 22:09:13 GMT -5
Wow. This is..... bad. No.... this is far from bad... this is like..... wow... Ok.. I can see this sheet is FA-AR from complete, so to help you before you get TOO far.... I'll break this down.
Ok.. he APPEARS 25... but how old is he really? Race... He cannot be a Vampirick Angel. That's not at all possible. Vampire is a demon. Angel is the total opposite of demon. Thus, a Demon Angel just will not and cannot work. Aside from that, a Vampire is an agent of evil, whereas an Angel is an embodiment of purity and an essence of goodness. Class....Sorry, no Gods allowed except for the ones that rule from Nirvana... Galvas being the higher of them. And the god of death is...guess? ....Death. Thus your character cannot have been turned in to the god of death. Death has existed for as long as living things have existed. This guy has NOT been around since the beginning of existance. History... Once again the Angelic Vampire thing won't work. And he still cannot be the god of death, or any god for that matter. And this needs to be HEAVILY expanded on. Look at other character sheets for examples of GOOD histories. Skills... The ability to fly is ok. And I can deal with the blood-sucking/power stealing, as long as it is limited in power and not used like every 5 minutes. Super Traits.... Dude... you just repeated your skills. Super Race traits is shit like...Levitation, Super Strength, Super Speed, the ability to breathe underwater, and stuff like that. Spells.... Time spells are hard to use. If you think you can do it, more power to you. But don't think it will help you out TOO much. Reversing time isn't possible. That's god-modding. You could have him reverse time in EVERY instance that something goes wrong for him. Weaknesses....You need to have atleast ONE physical weakness, AND ONE elemental weakness... This is the character sheet you MUST follow.
Name: Character name here... duh.
Age: ...need I comment?
Race: See the list in the RULES before putting this down.
Class: See above
Allignment: See above
Elements: ....see above...again... Also, only two elements maximum.
Appearance: Just a description of your character... what it looks like.... height, weight, hair color, eye color, tattoos, scars, wardrobe, etc.
Equipment: Any kind of gear your character carries essential to combat such as weapons, armor, support items (like a grappling hook, or something like that.)
Accessories: Stuff like jewlery and stuff... if it serves a purpose... Things like... strength enhancing gloves(...?) or whatever.
Skills: Just a list of skills here. Like... can your character fly? Or see through walls? Put it here.
Spells: Magick-based Skills are listed here. See the list of Forbidden Magicks so you'll know not to use them. Also... be a good sport and equip spells that correspond to your characters element(S).
Duel Spells: These spells are for use in "The Duel...." Those like spells that increase Attk of Def go here. They're useless in the other RP areas. DO NOT INCLUDE WHAT TYPE ROLLS ARE REQUIRED. I WILL DECIDE THAT.
History: Your character's background. Why is he here? What are his goals?
Weakness: Personal Handicaps and Elemental Handicaps. Not one. Both.
Personality: What's your character like? Nice? Cynical? We're dying to know... so put it here.
Ally(ies): Maybe your character is allied with someone else's character?
Extra: Just extra bits of Misc. info here...
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