{Variados} *~*MAR*~*
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Post by {Variados} *~*MAR*~* on Oct 22, 2004 18:50:50 GMT -5
;DI am lost... YAY... now what?
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Post by Vegeta on Oct 22, 2004 19:54:14 GMT -5
((Yoh and I will train you. You'll be teamed with Red DeLuce ( steelandmagick.proboards32.com/index.cgi?board=registry&action=display&thread=1086591193<--Profile) and Son Goku ( steelandmagick.proboards32.com/index.cgi?board=registry&action=display&thread=1086591766<---Profile) Lets begin.)) Variados enters a large forest setting during the late evening. The sun has just begun to set. She walks over to a small creek in the midst of the woods and sees a guy about her age, along with a younger boy standing beside it talking amongst themselves. On the ground nearby is a sword, a highly polished shield, and a red staff. RED: "Heh, ok Goku... I'mma catch one this time, watch! I'll use my Kyou Tama to bring 'em to the surface." The older of the two brings his palms together, forming a ball of energy between them. He raises his hands ready to release the energy into the creek when he realizes he's being watched by someone other than Goku. His fishing plans were cancelled. RED: "Hn? Who...?" He looks over his shoulder and sees the Variados. RED: "Who th' hell're you?"
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Post by Tasuke on Oct 22, 2004 20:00:14 GMT -5
Goku sat next to his master, cross-legged, and hands on his feet. Watching with a cartoony smile on his face, the boy rocked back and forth. The boy looks up from the creek, and at DeLuce, who seemed alarmed by something. Glancing back down into the creek, his jaw hung open as he watched the fish swim away, scared by the noise.
Goku: "Noooo!!! Come back!! . . . Huh?"
The boy blinks, then glances over his shoulder and in the direction of his master's gaze.
Goku: "Ehh... Huh...?"
Staring at the woman blankly, he continues sitting there cross-legged, holding his feet.
Goku: "Uhh... Hi..."
He looks back over at DeLuce.
Goku: "Who's that Red-sama?"
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{Variados} *~*MAR*~*
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Post by {Variados} *~*MAR*~* on Oct 22, 2004 21:12:56 GMT -5
Variados look around her, to make sure is to her they r reffering..
~Variados: Oh! Hi! What are you doing?~ ~Oh, I am Variados, but I am known as Mar~ Variados thinking to herself...
** who knows me... I can't remember, I shouldn't even say that. Nobody knows me at all**
~Sorry, if I interrupted u, I was just passing by~
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Post by Vegeta on Oct 22, 2004 21:21:22 GMT -5
((Uh... first we'll work on your dialogue....meaning how you talk.))
RED: "Mar, huh. Strange name, if I may say so."
((My dialogue is seperated by who's speaking (RED:) and by what they're saying (""Mar, huh. Strange name, if I may say so.") The Capitalized named indicates who is speaking. Followed by a Colon ( : ) you know that the dialogue is next. The quotation marks ("/") represent that whatever is between them is what's being said.))
RED: "Well, nice t' meetcha' just th' same, Mar."
RED: 'How odd. I wonder what she's doing here...'
((That is considered inner-monologue. Or, what that person is thinking. I use italics to indicate that, and would appreciate it if you did also, or if not italics, use astericks (*).))
RED: "Uh, anyway.... uhm... don't report this, eh? Be a friend?"
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{Variados} *~*MAR*~*
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Post by {Variados} *~*MAR*~* on Oct 22, 2004 21:29:44 GMT -5
((WOW, it is really complicated))
Mar: "Oh! Well, it comes from the name that my parents gave me, but because I was not call by my real name, I forgot it. So, now I just remember the word "Mar" coming out of the mouth of my dad" Make a pause there....
Mar: "What about you?"
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Post by Vegeta on Oct 22, 2004 22:34:34 GMT -5
RED: "DeLuce. Red DeLuce. And this li'l guy is Son Goku, my groupee."
Red looks back to the creek and spots the fish are returning.
RED: "........"
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Post by Tasuke on Oct 23, 2004 15:00:54 GMT -5
Goku: "Hello."
Giving a slight wave, he turns his head back to the creek to see the fish return as well.
Goku: "........"
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{Variados} *~*MAR*~*
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I am ok, cuz I belong to the T.C.I.S. where everybody take care of their health and me.
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Post by {Variados} *~*MAR*~* on Oct 23, 2004 19:45:34 GMT -5
Mar: "Well.... nice to meet ya!"
Give a nervous smile, and leave from the scenario.
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Post by Vegeta on Oct 24, 2004 1:15:08 GMT -5
((OOC: Where are you going?))
YOH: ((OOC: LMAO LMAO))
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{Variados} *~*MAR*~*
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I am ok, cuz I belong to the T.C.I.S. where everybody take care of their health and me.
Posts: 37
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Post by {Variados} *~*MAR*~* on Oct 25, 2004 19:53:25 GMT -5
Mar: "Who?..... ME? Well...... back to what I was doing b4 I stopped here?"
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